Let it Flow (work in progress)
04-25-2014, 12:47 PM,
Post: #1
Let it Flow (work in progress)
Quote:The pot glows white in the bathroom tonight
Not a speckle to be seen
A kingdom of isolation,
And it looks like I’m the queen.

The wind is howling like this swirling storm inside
Couldn’t keep it in, heaven knows I tried

Don’t let them in, don’t let them see
Be the good girl you always have to be
Conceal, don’t feel, don’t let them know
Well, now they know

Let it flow, let it flow
Can’t hold it back anymore
Let it flow, let it flow
Turn away and slam the door

I don’t care
What they’re going to hear
Let the storm rage on,
The smell never bothered me anyway

It’s funny how some distance
Makes everything seem small
And the fears that once controlled me
Can’t get to me at all

It’s time to see what I can do
To test the limits and break through
No right, no wrong, no rules for me
I’m free

Let it flow, let it flow
I am one with the wind and sky
Let it flow, let it flow
You’ll never see me cry

Here I land
And here I'll stay
Let the storm rage on

My power flurries through the air into the ground
My soul is spiraling in frozen fractals all around
And one thought crystallizes like an icy blast
I’m never going back,
The past is in the past

Let it flow, let it flow
I won't rise 'til the break of dawn
Let it flow, let it flow
That perfect girl is gone

Here I land
In the light of day
Let the storm rage on,
The smell never bothered me anyway

Thoughts? I know I have to completely re-write a few lines, but a lot of it works perfectly.
My logic is infallible. Resistance is futile.
04-25-2014, 02:10 PM,
Post: #2
RE: Let it Flow (work in progress)
Is this about pooping? It is about pooping, isn't it?
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04-25-2014, 03:25 PM,
Post: #3
RE: Let it Flow (work in progress)
(04-25-2014, 02:10 PM)Alien Wrote: Is this about pooping? It is about pooping, isn't it?

The squirts to be specific.
My logic is infallible. Resistance is futile.
04-27-2014, 02:13 AM,
Post: #4
RE: Let it Flow (work in progress)
2nd revision:
Quote:The pot glows white in the bathroom tonight
Not a speckle to be seen
A throne of isolation,
And it looks like I’m the king.

The wind is howling like this swirling storm inside
Couldn’t keep it in, heaven knows I tried

Don’t let them in, don’t let them see
Be the good girl you always have to be
Conceal, don’t feel, don’t let them know
Well, now they know

Let it flow, let it flow
Can’t hold it back anymore
Let it flow, let it flow
Turn away and slam the door

I don’t care
What they’re going to hear
Let the gas rage on,
The smell never bothered me anyway

It’s funny how some distance
Makes everything seem small
And the fears that once controlled me
Can’t get to me at all

It’s time to see what I can do
To test the limits and break through
No right, no wrong, no rules for me
I’m free

Let it flow, let it flow
I am one with the wind and sky
Let it flow, let it flow
You’ll never see me cry

Here I land
And here I'll stay
Let the gas rage on

My power flurries through the air into the ground
My soul is spiraling in frozen fractals all around
And one thought crystallizes like an icy blast
I’m never going back,
The past is in the past

Let it flow, let it flow
I won't rise 'til the break of dawn
Let it flow, let it flow
That perfect shine is gone

Here I land
In the light of day
Let the gas rage on,
The smell never bothered me anyway
My logic is infallible. Resistance is futile.
04-27-2014, 07:43 AM,
Post: #5
RE: Let it Flow (work in progress)
Is this poop? It's poop, isn't it?
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